It has been a perfect week this week with 10 impressive presenters! Thanks to the ever cute Prince Fiona and Prince Charming Johnny (remember Shrek?) for all the photographs taken in class. Well, Johnny managed to video tape of the class and I hope I to upload it on you tube and embed some video clips of our very own Group 3 presenters in the blog. Well, ready for comments?
Kimberly
Strengths
She is undeniably a charming presenter. Information presented was credible, validated well by evidences with proper referencing. The organisation of the speech is coherent and well tied up. There was also interaction with the audience during her speech. Speech given was audible, with good voice projection. There was also good eye contact with they audience. All in all, she manage to engage her audience! The power of her charming smile? Probably! :-)
Kimberly, the charming presenter. Wondering who is her "Prince Charming?"
Areas to improve
Well, there was a slight mistake in the PowerPoint slides order but was quickly rectified. Her tone was a bit plain.
Li Ai
Strengths
The striking and vibrant attire she was wearing for her presentation helped colour her presentation! PowerPoint slides were systematically organised and visual aids were explained to the audience. Brilliant recommendations on "Corporal Punishment" issues were also provided in her speech.
Areas to improve
A comic strip was shown to the in the Introduction, but there was hardly any time for the audience to read and grasp the message of the comic and its relevance to the topic. Tone was rather monotonous and was not persuasive. There was also limited eye contact with the audience. She was a bit tongue-tied during the Q&A session. :-)
Li Ai presented in a calm and relaxed manner.
Ting Ting
Strengths
She is such a pleasant presenter! The overview of her speech were given before she started her speech content. Hilarious attention getter that somehow caught her audience's attention. Definitions of jargon were given. The purpose of her speech was addressed directly to the audience. Visual aids were simple and well organised. She maintained good interactions and eye contact with her audience. Appropriate use of hand gestures livened up her dynamic speech.
Ting Ting remarkably presented a dynamic speech!
Areas to improve
There were some grammatical errors on the PowerPoint slides. :-)
Siaw Chin
Group 3's very own nutritionist in action!
Strengths
A smiley, friendly, mature presenter! The nature of her topic attracts audience's attention. Quotations from experts were also given. Information and evidences to support her stance were convincing and appealing. Slides were systematically organised, interesting with effective and graphical supporting materials. She built good rapport with the audience with consistent eye contact.
Areas of weakness
Substitution of the consonant "l" to "r", e.g. the word "conclude" sounded like "concrude". She was also a bit nervous during the Q&A session.
Ee Ting
Strengths
Like Li Ai, she is such a calm presenter. Information provided was brief and concise. Slides were simple and systematic. Speech was audible, presented at a moderate speed rate. During the Q&A session, she never forgot to thank the questioners.
Ee Ting gave a tranquil moment throught her speech.
Areas to improve
Tone was rather monotonous and not persuasive. There was no high and low tone. Eye contact was limited to me only! She could not really handle questions during the Q&A session.
6 comments:
Ting Ting: You look fine! I guess I have a fatter face! Urgh!!!!!!
wow, the pics so big and clear. Nice photo.Aiya, why li ai and kimberly looked down. Haha...Ting Ting looks good in tat pic.i dont think is fat.And siaw chin's presentation that day was really good. i'm looking forward for the other 5 presenters'comments.
coz they take the pic when we look down.haha... who take the pic ya? so worry about my mark. i m not confident at all coz i saw some of my audience talking there, seem they r not interesting in my presenting topic. i am "lost"~~~~~
hehe...thanks ting ting. u din tok much ler but i can hear GH sound when he is toking. it's ok. my memories not good. i will forget it very very fast. hahaha... all of u are good in presenting and wear very pretty. kimberly is pretty, very tall and look like lecturer. ;) ting ting like a office girl eventhough she din wear formal.:)haha...jz like wat miss angel say, siaw chin look like nutritionist.haha...great. :D
"ee tiing like me, a calm presenter"...oh my god. sure got scary gossip again. hahaha...
Hi all!
This week is our ECS free week, then will resume as usual next week for the second assessment preparations on Group Discussion!
Kimberly: I knew you were nervous that's how the slides went a bit crazy! Anyway, good presentation!
Tong:Would be good if you could sneak and watch presentations from other groups!
thanks miss Angel for ur comments on my weaknesses. i will try my best to improve my pronunciation in future.
thank u kiet and liai for ur praising too. actually i also felt very nervous while looking at the audiences frm the ground but as what miss Angel told us that we need to hv eye contact to d audiences.
liai dun be too sad, I think u can done very well in future again. well ‘add oil’ in ur next future presentation and won’t give up as well as other presenters o!!!!!!
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